Story Board

Shooting Script

1

Final Scene: Violent Drill scene

Location: Kitchen (My house)

Lighting: Try lighting behind characters

Characters: Main and John

Props: drill, cigarette

Costume: John – Jeans and White T’shirt, Main – Formal suiting 

Start with ECU moving out into a CU of John (1.5 – 2 secs)

Switch to main character (CU and shot reverse shot) looking at him holding a drill and blowing smoke in John’s face (1 – 1.5 secs)

Switch back to CU of John (1 sec)

Then CU of main stubbing cigarette on own hand (0.5 secs)

Switch to a CU of John (1 secs)

Then finally MS of John and behind the main character getting up into a standing position, bringing the drill into view and then delivery of his line and the drill going (5 secs)

{sound bridge – sound of drill bridges the scene with fade to black}

Fade to black and coming soon appearing on the screen (3 secs)

2

First Pub scene: Finding out about the Murders

Location: Gatehouse (if filming is permitted by head)

Lighting: Warm colours, create the atmosphere as happy as a pub would be)

Characters: Main and Unknown (informant)

Props: Two pints

Costume: Main-casual, Informant-dressed below working class

MS with slow zoom of main (emotionless) (1.5 secs)

CU of pint on table (0.5 secs)

CU with slow zoom of main again showing no emotions (1.5 secs)

POV shot of the informant taking a seat (2 secs)

CU of informant placing pint on table (0.5 secs)

CU of informant saying his line (2 secs)

CU of Main saying his line (2 secs)

ECU of informant saying his line (2 secs)

ECU of main (1 sec)

3

Second Pub scene: An act of violence

Location: Gatehouse (if filming is permitted by head)

Lighting: Warm colours; create the atmosphere as happy as a pub would be)

Characters: Main and the wicked

Props: Snooker ball, sock and soft ball.

Costume: Main- Formal, Wicked-casual (maybe light colour top)

TS of main walking to snooker table (2 secs)

ECU grabbing snooker ball (1 sec)

ECU of snooker ball going in sock (1 sec)

MS of the wicked being beat (4 secs)

4

Learning scene: Finding out the unknown

Location: Any road

Lighting: Daylight

Characters: Teacher

Props: phone

Costume: formal

LS of teacher answering phone (1 sec)

HT CU behind character of teacher’s phone near ear hearing what’s said (2 secs)

5

Sleep Scene: Sleep situation

Location: 1-house hallway 2-road by a car

Lighting: 1-dark and dingy 2-daylight

Characters: Main and Christopher

Props:

                1-hammer

                2-envelope and car

Costume Main- formal for both, Christopher-casual bloody

1

TS HT Christopher crawling backwards says his line. (2 secs)

MS of hammer and character still saying line. (2 secs)

2

TS MS of main seeing envelope on car windscreen while Christopher still speaking (2.5-3 secs)

OSS opening the envelope (1.5 secs)

CU of words on the contents (2 secs)

6

Near last scene: Running Scared

Location: Road

Lighting: Daylight

Characters: Main

Props: two knives and duct tape

Costume: white vest boxer shorts

TS MS of Main from behind limping covered in blood two knives duct taped to his hand (3 secs)

TS MS from  of character    “                         “                           “    (3 secs)

MS CU of character falling to knees and an attempt at slitting his own throat. (3-4 secs)

7

First scene: The experiment

Location: School classroom preferably scientific one

Lighting slightly did with emphasis on teacher

Characters: An audience of many of the actors and the teacher

Props: White board and a file

Costume: formal as teacher Mixture of clothing’s (combination of classes in society)

First shot will be one continues tracking shot of CU of significant things.

                CU Hand shutting door

                CU High heels walking

                CU of her torso

                CU side of head

Used so the sound does not change and between shots will be writing on screen (10-12 secs)

MS LT moving camera around teacher saying lines

CU moving camera of audience

OSS teacher looking at audience

CU moving camera of audience

8

Run scene

Location: church road

Lighting: Daylight

Characters: Main

Props: Axe

Costume: Trousers and topless

One continues moving MS of character running slow motion (5-6 secs)

9
How often do you sleep scene

Location: Any road

Lighting: daylight

Characters: main

Props: envelope and car

Costume: Casual

Moving high angle MS character noticing the envelope (2 secs)

OSS opening envelope (1.5 secs)

CU of writing (1 sec)

CU of characters face (1.5 secs)  

10

The collection of violent shots

Location: outside

Lighting daylight

Characters: main

Props: bayonet

Low Angle Mid shot of main character attacking with fists and knife (4-5 secs)

11

Weapons shots

Location: Shed (outhouse)

Lighting: darkish

Characters: None

Props: Mixture of tools and weapons

Moving CU of weapons (2 secs)

Moving MS of weapons (2 secs)

12

Killing many scene

Location Kitchen

Lighting: Natural house lights

Characters: main and Benicia

Props: cleaver

Costume: casual clothing for main and bed clothing for Benicia

MS of main holding cleaver (1.5 secs)

MS behind main with cleaver coming into shot (1.5 secs)

13 

Removal service tongue on order scene

Location: Confined space, like a cell

Lighting: Warm

Characters: main

Props: fake blood, scissors, tissue

Costume:  Smart shirt and tie

MS character falling to knees (2 secs)

CU of retrieving scissors (1 sec)

MS of character opening and closing scissors (2 secs)   

CU moving from forehead to end of scissors closing (4-5 secs)

MS character spitting blood (2 secs)

14

Therapy scene

Location: Small room

Lighting: natural lighting

Characters main and Joan

Props: None

Costume: Smart shirt and tie  

MS behind main of Joan Talking (5 secs)

15

Getting Dressed

Location Bedroom

Lighting: Natural

Characters Main

Props: none

Costume: Smart shirt and tie

CU Shirt buttons (1.5sec)

CU Tie (1.5secs)

CU Waistcoat buttons (1.5secs)

16

Dog attack

Location: Main Front room of a home

Lighting: natural

Character: Main and my trained dog (Tyson)

Props: None

Costume: Smart shirt and tie

CU dog biting main’s arm (3secs)

17

Unhappy dog

Location: Dog pound

Lighting: Daylight

Character: None but angry dog

Props: None

Costume: None

MS of angry Rottweiler (2secs)

18

He is coming scene

Location: House hallway

Lighting: Dark dingy

Character: Main

Props: Knife

Costume: Smart Shirt and tie

MS Character walking towards camera with knife dragging on wall (3secs)

19

Injured man

Location: Household

Lighting: Natural

Character: Main

Props: Fake blood

Costume: topless

ECU to CU of a blood filled face (3.5secs)

20

Soldier down for shellshock

Location: confined space like cell

Lighting: Natural lighting

Character: main

Props: Fake blood

Costume: Smart Suit and tie

MS Character walking around cell (1.5secs)

MS Character striking wall with foot (1sec)

MS of character striking wall with hands (1.5secs)

CU of character striking wall with hands (1.5secs)

MS of character hitting wall with head (1.5secs)

CU of character hitting wall with head (1.5secs)

21

Cleansing the tools

Location: end of a garden

Lighting: daylight

Character: Main

Props: axe and cloth

Costume: Smart Shirt and tie

LS of character cleaning (1sec)

CU of cleaning and showing axe (1sec)